Moroha 諸刃

A few months ago, I was feeling nostalgic and decided to download a copy of the old 1978 animated movie, Watership Down, based on the epic novel by the same name by Richard Adams. I had some mixed feelings about this movie, mostly because I can recall that after seeing it as a young boy, I had nightmares about the acid-trip scene where the half-dead survivor recounts the extermination of the burrow. I later read the book as a teenager and absolutely loved it though, so I decided to give the movie another shot.

Also another surprise: the song “Bright Eyes” in the movie is sung by none other than this person.

So after Karisa was in bed, we started the movie. Almost immediately though, we ran into a major problem: Ryoko couldn’t follow any of it. Usually Ryoko doesn’t have too difficult of a time with TV, movies, etc., but this was different. Maybe it was the heavy use of author-invented words for the rabbit language, such as silflay, hrududu, owsla, etc., or maybe it was just the british accents. Ryoko decided that without Japanese subtitles, she probably wouldn’t be able to watch this film.

Well, finding English subtitles usually isn’t too difficult, there are many websites that have subtitle files you can download for thousands of movies. After a short while of looking I found some English subtitles for Watership Down. I tried them with the movie and the timing was perfect. But what about Japanese subtitles? I hadn’t had much success finding Japanese subtitles in the past, and this was no exception.

So I decided: I can make a translation of these subtitles! I’m always complaining about how bad the subtitles are in the fan-subs I watch, aren’t I? I figured I couldn’t do any worse, at least. So after looking around for the necessary software, I decided on Subtitle Workshop, since it was fairly easy to use, had all the functions I needed, and is freeware.

So here’s a sample of my work. This is from the very beginning which is the fable/creation scene:

Long ago, the great Frith made the world. He made all the stars… and the world lived among the stars. Frith made all the animals and birds… and, at first, made them all the same. Now, among the animals was El-ahrairah, the Prince of Rabbits.
He had many friends… and they all ate grass together. After a time, the rabbits wandered everywhere… multiplied, eating as they went. Then, Frith said to El-ahrairah: “Prince Rabbit, if you cannot control your people… I shall find ways to control them.”

And here is my translation:

むかしむかし、偉大なるフリースは世を創った。星を創って、そして世は星とともに住んでいた。フリースは動物や鳥を創った．．．しかし初めに皆を同じように創った。動物の中の一匹はウサギの王子エル・エレアラがいた。仲間がたくさんいて、みなは一緒に草を食べた。時が流れると、ウサギは所々にいて、よく食べ、繁殖した。そしてフリースはエル・エレアラに言った。「ウサギの王子よ、自分の|民族の繁栄を制御できないなら、われが制御するであろう。」

That scene involves very specific phraseology in English that we generally associate with epic or biblical tales, something that I can’t do the equivalent of in Japanese very well. Ryoko gave me a bit of a helping hand on some of the phrasing, so perhaps its passable.

The other really hard scene so far is Cowslip’s exisistential poetry jam:

Where are you going, stream?
Far, far away.
Take me with you, stream.
Take me on your dark journey.
Lord Frith, take me far away, to the hearts of light.
The silence. I give you my breath.
My life. The silence.

I still don’t feel too good about my translation for that scene, since a good Japanese translation would require some familiarity with Japanese haiku and tanka poetry, which I most certainly lack. Still, the experience so far has been pretty fun, if a lot more time-consuming than I originally anticipated. I’m maybe only a third of the way through the movie so far. Maybe next time I’m in Japan I’ll take a look at it, so I can see how crappy my translation is compared to a professional.

A few months ago I was able to get hold of the e-books for the novelization of the entire Robotech series. I have very fond memories of watching the series as a young child, and as a teenager I had found a few off the books at my local library and read them, even though they only had a few of them, and the ones they did have weren’t in order.

The first six books parallel the first 30 episodes of the series, aka the first robotech war. These were alright and provided lots of interesting details not found in the series. The author does a lot of interesting retconning, though. From explaining why the SDF-1 never performs another space-fold maneuver after the initial jump to Pluto, to why the fighters still bank and turn like atmospheric planes even though they are in space, all the original bad writing from the original series and the bad science is painstakingly and skillfully (taking into account the original material they had to work with, it really is a skillful undertaking…) adapted by the authors to somehow fit thier overall story and scheme. The authors could have saved themselves a lot of time if they just adhered to the 25 laws of Japanese Animation (my favorite is 4: In space, constant thrust equals constant velocity.)

The hardest thing to read has to be the romance. Really bad writing and dialogue. Here’s a famous scene where Miriya, a defeated and humiliated Zentraedi pilot, tries to kill her rival, Max:

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This is something that I’ve been doing for several months but just haven’t gotten around to talking about, much like everything else on this little-updated blog. My brother Porter introduced me to this group that is playing a D&D campaign, but instead of getting together once a week or such, all communication is handled via email. The campaign is here, where they have archives through December of 2004. My character is Allistair in case you’re curious. It started out with the standard ‘save the damsel in distress’ adventure, and since Porter and I have come in it’s become the standard ‘now you have to save the whole world from the clutches of the Evil Dark God.’

One nice thing I like about more experienced role-players is that party conflict only occurs because their characters don’t get along, not because the players themselved can’t get along. (Unlike campaigns I played in high school, where the adventure and goals get thrown out the window becuase of an inter-party bloodbath caused by an argument. I’m sure my friend Mitch remembers well.)

Another really nice thing is that it has a very small time requirement. The daily load is usually no more than reading five or six emails and writing one of your own. Of course one turn per day is about the maximum speed it moves along, but for five minutes a day that’s pretty good, in my opinion.

In fact it’s been so fun that I’m thinking pretty seriously of looking for a role-playing group here that I might be able to join. When I was at one of the gaming stores in town there was a bulletin board with lots of groups looking for players. I might just give it a try. … or maybe I’ll wait until the summer. This semester I have two conferences to prepare for, a paper to finish and publish, a class to take, TA another class, and continue my research. I’ll be pretty busy.